Suggestion for wording revision

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I rearranged as I suggested, but I sense that the family section is now lacking--it doesn't really explain about the WE family. I hesitate to add more text...concise is definitely better. What do you think about putting the values section first (up through the bullets) after the About intro bit, and then the friendly and neighborly part would be at the end of the family section? Other thoughts?

Alison Snieckus (talk)‎10:38, 2 January 2015

Hi Alison,

For the purposes of this page I think it's best to keep it concise - a light handed approach to communicate the sense of the community rather than going into detail. I'm happy with shifting the values section up as suggested. I don't have any other thoughts and not overly worried about the family section being on the shorter side.

Mackiwg (talk)‎10:49, 2 January 2015

OK. I made the changes. Still not really happy with the flow, the changes didn't fix it, but probably good enough given it's just a quick overview.

Alison Snieckus (talk)‎11:26, 2 January 2015

I'll have a think . Perhaps the inclusion of some type of activity, eg registering on the community list and noting the importance of completing a user profile page so people know who community members are etc might fill the gaps.

Mackiwg (talk)‎11:32, 2 January 2015

Yes, something like that sounds good.

Alison Snieckus (talk)‎12:55, 2 January 2015
 
 
 
 
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