Suggestion for wording revision

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Hi Alison,

For the purposes of this page I think it's best to keep it concise - a light handed approach to communicate the sense of the community rather than going into detail. I'm happy with shifting the values section up as suggested. I don't have any other thoughts and not overly worried about the family section being on the shorter side.

Mackiwg (talk)‎10:49, 2 January 2015

OK. I made the changes. Still not really happy with the flow, the changes didn't fix it, but probably good enough given it's just a quick overview.

Alison Snieckus (talk)‎11:26, 2 January 2015

I'll have a think . Perhaps the inclusion of some type of activity, eg registering on the community list and noting the importance of completing a user profile page so people know who community members are etc might fill the gaps.

Mackiwg (talk)‎11:32, 2 January 2015

Yes, something like that sounds good.

Alison Snieckus (talk)‎12:55, 2 January 2015
 
 
 
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