Feedback on Version 2.0 of the elevator pitch

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The concept of "sustainable conduit" is an awkward formulation - it doesn't flow easily off the tongue and I was left asking what does this mean? I first needed to read the rationale before I understood the concept.

I can see the attraction for prospective partners joining a sustainable collaboration (as opposed to a flash in the pan) and the importance of communicating this value clearly and succinctly. I'm not sure that the current formulation achieves this?

mmm - thinking out loud - What about The "OERu is a sustainable innovation partnership connecting learners ...."

Innovation is one of the important reasons (and benefits) for joining the OERu - so why not state this?

Wayne Mackintosh, OER Foundation, New Zealand (talk)‎13:15, 25 May 2016

I totally agree. The word "conduit" is awful, confusing in this sentence. Had no idea what it meant. I like David Porters solution, just a few comments below. Good work everybody! So great to see this taking shape! Loved the student video also.

Slambert (talk)‎17:31, 25 May 2016
 
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