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Generally, this is looking quite good; remember to check the grading rubric to make sure you have covered all of the requirements.

Figures: All 7 figures need a figure legend; also refer to them in the text.


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Capitalize Benedict where ever you use it.

Additional citations to provide more background sources (perhaps for the history connection also).

Dmccabe (talk)03:14, 20 April 2009