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Final edits; Friday deadline002:04, 12 April 2010

Final edits; Friday deadline

Hi folks,

this is coming along nicely, let;s make a few final edits to knock it out of the park.


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Your figures start at Fig 1 and then later start over at Figure 1. Fix that please, but turn off the Richtext editor to accomplish that.


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I don't really see a math connection yet here. Why not have them measure and graph the plant growth - but be specific, tell us what sort of graph and perhaps provide a blank graph to fill in.


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Dmccabe (talk)02:04, 12 April 2010