Feedback on Banner #3 - A Purposeful Partnership

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Copy text for Banner #3 reads

Whether you’re looking to reach a global audience to expand your brand; interested in joining an international network of innovative educators; or you’re motivated by community service and social good, the ROI on a partnership with OERu is substantial.

I would recommend we list the motivations according to the order of priority derived from both the context and input evaluations of reasons why partners join the network. I also suggest minor tweaks noting that the OERu is primarily an institutional network before being an partnership of individuals and many of the non-business readers will not know what ROI is I propose rewording the copy as follows:

Whether you’re interested in joining an international network of innovative educational institutions educators; you're motivated by community service and social good, or looking to reach a global audience to expand your brand, the return on investment on a partnership with OERu is substantial.