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The third sentence in the first section needs revision to make it a sentence. I'm not completely sure the intent, so I'm leaving a comment here for consideration.

"Early and frequent releases of key steps in the process, creating a tight feedback loop among course designers, developers, prospective learners and OERu partner institutions."
Alison Snieckus (talk)‎12:18, 29 January 2015

I have revised as follows:

"Early and frequent releases of key steps in the design process will facilitate feedback loops and opportunities for peer review among course designers, developers, prospective learners and OERu partner institutions."
Mackiwg (talk)‎09:45, 2 February 2015

Looks good -- DONE.

Alison

Alison Snieckus (talk)‎10:02, 2 February 2015
 
 
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