Question about item in bulleted list
The bulleted list under Berne Convention, includes the following:
- A series of minimum standards defining exclusive rights
I recommned revising as the other 4 items in the list are sentences, whereas this item is a phrase. But more importantly, I don't see the point of this item. As I am not familiar with exclusive rights, the item doesn't offer me enough of an example to get anything out of it.
Just offering a learner's perspective.
I removed the bullet about exclusive rights. It would add an unnecessary layer of confusion to try and introduce and explain exclusive rights in this example.
I added a clarifying into sentence about the intention of the Berne convention to create a system of "equal" treatment.
Better experience for the learner now. Thanks.