Question about item in bulleted list

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The bulleted list under Berne Convention, includes the following:

  • A series of minimum standards defining exclusive rights

I recommned revising as the other 4 items in the list are sentences, whereas this item is a phrase. But more importantly, I don't see the point of this item. As I am not familiar with exclusive rights, the item doesn't offer me enough of an example to get anything out of it.

Just offering a learner's perspective.

Alison

ASnieckus (talk)06:01, 27 December 2011

Alison,

I removed the bullet about exclusive rights. It would add an unnecessary layer of confusion to try and introduce and explain exclusive rights in this example.

I added a clarifying into sentence about the intention of the Berne convention to create a system of "equal" treatment.

Better experience for the learner now. Thanks.

Mackiwg (talk)16:09, 30 December 2011