Main Discussion for Today
Hi - some constructive critisism from me. If need, we can talk individually later tommrrow on the points below
Victor - I have no problem with the content. Just a couple of housekeeping issues as follows: 1.“Practicalises” – Is this correct?...I could be wrong. 2.“There is not disability access policy and several of its structures remains to be tested” – Typo’s
Luisa 1. The first 3 articles do not state which companies – The names of the companies and a one liner background on them would help a reader.
Akachi 1. Got confused by the heading – “Contribution to Question 4 of MBL911K Assignment.” I evaluated it based on Question 4, which may be incorrect. This is a different question right?
Shumi/Utang I found some typo's on ours as well! - we will ammend. Final Referencing details to be completed.
Conclusion - Just a thought to keep in mind - are we sure this is a 70% - 80% assignment as we agreed at study school?
--Shumimlingo 19:00, 8 March 2009 (UTC)