Fragment of a discussion from Talk:EDSLIONS/weekly discussions/July 24, 2011
Yes. I felt the brief was not really followed in Phase 2. The assessment of the strategic position doesnt really come out
Earlier you mentioned that they could have gone too much into the insides. I hope you highlighted your specific areas of concern so we can table it for a discussion...perhaps we can skype with them once they've seen your comments.
--Shumimlingo 16:26, 24 July 2011 (UTC)
I've sent a another attachment one layout of the how a SPA could be carried out. Its basically emphasizes a balanced score-card approach much like what is recommended by the lecturer. I think that the information is probably all there but it needs to be more focused on the brief