Feedback on Version 3.0 of the elevator pitch

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I've incorporated most of the feedback from v2 into the current iteration, and look forward to your thoughts.

regarding the following points:

  • Tertiary - while this will be common within academia, i think it will lead to confusion with prospective students.
  • 'industry quality standards' - i think we cover this through the 'globally recognized credentials'
  • Conduit - I love the word and concept, but will bow to the majority. :-)
  • Free - I've steered clear of this due to the potential landmines mentioned in the initial draft
Brandscaping (talk)08:10, 26 May 2016

In my mind, the word "conduit" conjures a pipe, railroading people down a single channel, without any freedom to alter direction...