Feedback on Version 2.0 of the elevator pitch

Fragment of a discussion from Talk:OERu/Planning/OERu marketing communications and partner engagement/Value Proposition/Elevator pitch

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I agree with 'learners can develop' - much more direct language. 2 verbs is muddy. I'm OK either way with HE vs tertiary, happy to go with the majority.

Slambert (talk)‎

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