MBL 915 Assignment
i assume, we have all managed to browse through the 3rd Draft, any comments?
Sorry guys I have been slow in my review. however I have the follwoing points to make: 1. 32 PAGES looks like its too long to me? How many pages is the limit / target? 2. The SWOT analysis is weak - we may need to do a table and sum up key points. I can add some points on that.
We are required to deliver a minimum of 20pages with no clear limit. The current document is 26 real peages. Your suggestion about the SWOT analisis will be helpful. When will that come in?
l can submit my comments if there are any tomorrow l have problems with my yahoo today, l do not know why.--Shungunyoni 18:23, 17 May 2009 (UTC)
Akachi, Shungu, Taurai any comments? thanks Jerry for for the contribution.
it seems everyone else is quite happy with the draft Victor. please if you do not have any comments kindly state "no comments" so we know that we are on the same page and can progress quicker
I think if we utilise a table that will be a ploy to reduce the length of the assignment, however i do not think that will give us the opportunity to put an indepth analysis of the environment as expected. Lets just focus on improving the way it is. It might be the flow of the information which has a problem. I going through the draft while participating on Wiki so i do no have much to contribute.
Thanks Kaygo, i guess that will be all the comments from members on this. As a note i will be doing final edits, remove all notes unclaimed/without sources and hoping to do final upload by 12noon moro GMT.
Thanks to you all.
Akachi would like to know who is doing the QC on this assignment? Victor please advise; and remind him as well how the Wiki meetings structured...in terms of where to reply
Unfortunatly, i beleive that will still be me. I will do the best i can as i have done so far. Any comments so far on the QC?
just to confirm on the font size, spacing,referencing, etc
Jeremiah is right guys the SWOT analysis is not all that good,eg, where a definition of Opportunities is given it was given as if market offerings as broad as it is its an opportunity that is wrong.