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Hi folks,

this is in good shape. The kids liked it; nice work. I have not heard back from the teacher regarding final outcomes. Please make the following changes and we'll call it done.

  • Figure legends: Each one needs one and we need a 1 through X sequence. Each figure should be referenced in the text. Turn off the rich text editor to work on that.


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  • Capitalize Parafilm and add the registered trademark symbol; I'm not aware of a generic term or a competing product, but you may be able to find one:

Brand names[edit]

Please keep in mind that this is an international resource. So, by all means list the product brands that you used along with the registered trademark symbol (which you may cut and paste from here), but also include a generic description of the product. Product names should be capitalized. Examples:

  • Dixie® cups (4 oz waxed paper cups)
  • Karo® syrup (clear corn syrup)

Non brand-name local terms like soda, pop, or minerals can be replaced with a more global terms like carbonated beverage or soft drink and the use of the registered trade mark symbol (®) is not needed. Once changes have been made, you should delete the text ''{{Brands}}''from your page.

Dmccabe (talk)01:43, 23 April 2010