EPM Assignment Part b

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I think its fine. A guaranteed "A" for effort. My only concern is that there are certain pages that have blank columns and it makes it look a bit weird ie pages 22-24. I'm aware that the topic would have been on the previous pages, but nonetheless the blank pages look weird. Victor can you help us out with your renowned presentation skills on this? --Shumimlingo 16:26, 2 May 2011 (UTC)

Shumimlingo (talk)05:26, 3 May 2011

There were 2 versions - one from JC and the second one from Calvin. My intention was to limit stuff in the tables, and then expand on the narrative section. However Calvin has merged all into the table. We have to make as decision on which one is better for our goal - both in terms of better presentation, and also ensuring that we stay within the 20 page limit. There is need to reduce the stuff, and key would be to ensure that we dont lose important stuff.

JEREMIAH CHAPHXANYA (talk)05:32, 3 May 2011

JC, my points far below can guide. Using both will be far more helpful.

Victor.mensah (talk)05:43, 3 May 2011