Changes needed
This is very well done. There are some changes to be made before final grading.
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Give some dimensions for the size of the paper needed for the graph.
Using Galleries[edit]
I notice that you have several images on your page. It may be useful to organize them in a gallery. The format is quite simple:
The following captioned gallery was added to this page using this syntax:
<gallery caption="Data set 1;Valentine's Day snow storm 2007, South Burlington Vermont">
Image:315Small Snow.jpg|Figure 1. Snow accumulation at 3:15 during a snowstorm on Feb 14 2007 in South Burlington Vermont USA; click to view closer
Image:345 smallSnow.jpg|Figure 2. Snow accumulation at 3:45; click to view closer.
Image:415 smallSnow.jpg|Figure 3. Snow accumulation at 4:15; click to view closer.
</gallery>
- Data set 1;Valentine's Day snow storm 2007, South Burlington Vermont
Figure 1. Snow accumulation at 3:15 during a snowstorm on Feb 14 2007 in South Burlington Vermont USA; click to view closer
Figure 2. Snow accumulation at 3:45; click to view closer.
Figure 3. Snow accumulation at 4:15; click to view closer.
Once changes have been made, you should delete the text ''{{Gallery}}''from your page.
I think the gallery will really improve things, because right now the pictures break up the flow and make the lesson run to more printed pages than needed. A second gallery for the reflections photos would e great.
Reword this piece: and how not ones persons fingerprints.
Cite from the text about the class-wide graph to the finished graph like this (Figure 8). Each figure should be cited somewhere in the text.
In your citations, provide a link to Prof. Whiteford's web page. Some teacher from Auckland or Kenya won't have a clue who he is and the link to his teaching resources will be valuable.
Not all of you have reflected.
Final Edits[edit]
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