Big claims
Hi Leigh I have changed these sentences so they now read less "arrogantly". You were making pretty big claims and I wonder don't other organisations such as MIT, Open poly in the UK and Phoenix have models of open ed already?
It is hoped that this effort to document, interrogate and critique the Otago Polytechnic experience, free from hype and bias [don't think you need this], will shed light on a case of open educational development in a New Zealand tertiary education and training institution. This will give the national and international movement something further to use as a benchmark, so open education can move forward as effectively as possible.