912L final discussions
Fragment of a discussion from Talk:EDSLIONS/weekly discussions/June 28, 2009
I have just gone through and its making a lot more of sense to me now as i have them all together. I was a bit worried about the flow, as a lot of content was presented as lists/bulleted. Was wondering if it may make it any better to utilise a lot more of paragraph/naratives. This is however a minor point and may be disregarded.
Hi Victor, thanks for that we will look into it and see where it is excessive to improve on it.--Luisaserra 16:14, 28 June 2009 (UTC)
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