Liron A essays

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My School Trip

Hi, I want to tell you about my school trip to the desert. Last week, all the students in my school went on a trip for three days. On the first day, we went to Jerusalem to the Wailing Wall. It was beautiful and exciting because this place has been an historic place for the Jews for many years and it is important to know about it. At night, we slept in a tent in a camp in the Judean desert. We made a bonfire and started to sing. It was a lot of fun.

On the second day, we went on a dangerous path for four hours. I was really scared and I also cried. After that we went to the Dead Sea. Some of the students entered the sea and the others went to the mall that was close to the beach. On the second night, we slept at the same place, but on this night there was karaoke and everybody was awake.

On the last day, we came back to Jerusalem, but visited other places, for example; to the Ammunition Hill. After the Ammunition Hill, we finished our trip and went back to our sweet homes. I really enjoyed the trip and the main reason was because I was with my best friends.

(Comment.gif: Excellent organization, Liron. Go over some of the differences between our work and let me know if you have any questions. --nelliemuller 13:29, 12 November 2008 (UTC))

High Holidays

Rosh Hashana

hey, I'm Liron and I want to tell you about the holiday of Rosh Hashana. It was just three days but amazing. At the first day, my uncels came to my home until the evening and we enjoyed so much. Everyone tell some funny jokes and storys that happened in the past. At the second day, we went to friends for lunch and at night I went to party in Herzliya with my best friend. At the last day, we did barbecue with all the big family and after that I went to another party in Tel Aviv. I really enjoyed in this holiday.



Yom Kippur



Applying for Visa to the United States

Harzit 29,Netanya.

Herzal 30, Tel Aviv.

Embassy United States

Applying for viza to the United States

Dear sir,
I am Liron Aharon and I want to get a visa to U.S.A. I am a student at school and I want to go to travel and visit my family that live in the United States. I want to go for only two months in the summer. I hope that it is not a problem to get it because I really want to go there. I didn't see my family for three years and I miss them very much. The most important thing is that my cousin marry in August and if I don't be there, I will be very disappointed.

Wait for answer
Yours truly,
Liron Herzel

Organized tour to the United States

                                                                             Herzel 2, 

Organized tour to the United States

World Travel Company

New York

Dear sir/miss,

My name is Liron and I’m seventeen years old. I am interested in going on an organized tour to United States with girls in my age. In the past I traveled to Italy and Turkey but I’v never been to the USA. My dream is to visit. It will be my first organized tour because my previous tours were independent with my family.

I want to combine sceneries, history and relaxation in the trip. Part of the trip will be with a guide that will tell me about the history of the places and take me to museums and to known sites like Universal Studios in California and to the Liberty Enlightening the World in New York. In addition, in my spare time, I want to go to the sea and to see the beauty of nature.

I hope to hear from you soon and to hear that you found me a suitable tour. If you have some other options for me, please tell me about them and maybe I will consider them, too.

Thanks in advance,

Yours truly,

Liron A.


The purpose of my essays is to write about wishes.
I have many wishes in my life, but three of them are most important.
The first dream that I want to realize is to get one million dollars. I could spend this money on big car and house but although to help poor people in their problems.
My second dream is to visit in Costa-Rica and see the beautiful beaches there. Last year, my mother visited there and she told me that I must go there. There are silent and spectacular views in this place.
My last wish is to be a famous dancer in Israel and also in U.S.A. I really love to dance and I want to succeed in this, so it will be wonderful to be a known dancer, which everyone wants to see her.
I hope that some day I realize even one from these wishes because it is really important to me.

It's hard for me!!!

Many people are often scared by situations and they don't know how to deal with them. Like a normal person, I also experienced scary cases. One of them was one month ago when my brother entered Gaza. My brother is 19 years old and he is a soldier. He is so important to me and I was really afraid that something would happen to him. When he told my parents that he entered Gaza, we worried because Hamas dominates the area and they are bad people that want to kill all the Israelis. I didn't know how to stay calm and I began to cry. My mother is a strong woman and she told me that we need to be optimistic and to pray for the health of the soldiers. I sent my brother some lovely messages and he saw them after a week. I tell him that I love him every opportunity because I know that it helps him. Yesterday, Israel Defense Forces left Gaza because Israel agreed to a cease-fire with Hamas. Now that my brother is at home, I am not afraid and I hope that he will not go back to fight the enemy.

(Comment.gif: Liron, You need an opening and a closing paragraph that have at least 3 sentences. Divide your composition so that you have 3 paragraphs. --Nellie Deutsch 17:54, 19 January 2009 (UTC))