Career Development/Thank You Note

Thank You Note (sample)

Original

Hi George,

Thank you for lunch and meeting with me today. Everytime I learn more about this position I become more interested in what you do. I know my natural ability to organize and provide administrative support would greatly increase the effectiveness of your business. It seems very clear to me, that it would be a pleasure to be part of your team.

I hope we can continue our discussions.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours truly,

Ann Washington (name changed)

Revised

Hi George,

It was a pleasure meeting you today, and learning more about this position and its scope of responsibilities.

Suffice to say, I am excited and encouraged by the prospect of working with you / Unique Homes: it is indeed, a 'unique' opportunity that is a natural fit for my career interests and personal goals.

I look forward to the next steps, and discussing how I can fit into your future plans.

Yours truly,

Ann Washington (name changed)

Notes

Active tense; energy in the words, concise, adds value to the reader; moves the conversation further; friendly.