Thread:Changes needed (11)

This is very well done. There are some changes to be made before final grading.

Give some dimensions for the size of the paper needed for the graph.

I think the gallery will really improve things, because right now the pictures break up the flow and make the lesson run to more printed pages than needed. A second gallery for the reflections photos would e great.

Reword this piece: and how not ones persons fingerprints.

Cite from the text about the class-wide graph to the finished graph like this (Figure 8). Each figure should be cited somewhere in the text.

In your citations, provide a link to Prof. Whiteford's web page. Some teacher from Auckland or Kenya won't have a clue who he is and the link to his teaching resources will be valuable.

Not all of you have reflected.