Thread:Final Drafts (5)

Phase 3: Calvin, I’ve been going through your section now. Almost finished. Just noticed that in some sections there are some one liners which need more flesh. I’ll highlight them to you with suggested ideas. Remember Phase 3 is the meat of the assignment so there can be no wishy washy stuff on it. Perhaps luisa's comments later will help. --Shumimlingo 16:28, 24 July 2011 (UTC)