Cyber Stars Recount

We worked together. We each wrote a change diamante poem and we then edited each others to change, remove, add or delete words.

LOGan and james

Flowers

Sharp spiky

Looking watering moving

I like watching the flowers grow

Wriggling and rattling

Trying to get back up

I

trees

Growing sprouting

Shooting spearing sprinting up

Into a new form

Bombing increasing expanding

Trunk leaves

Sprouting growing

Shooting soaring roaring into a new form

Increasing expanding blooming

Trunk leaves

Tree

Flowers

Sharp prickly

Looking watering wriggling.

I like watching the flowers grow

Shrinking blowing going

Moving rattling

Shrunk

Analise and Jordan

Trees

Grow leafy

Falling growing shrinking

Children climbing the tall long trees

Drinking water feeding

Brown green

Trees

Trees

Bigger branches

Falling increasing shrinking

Kids reaching up the branches

Slurping hosing feeding

Light dark

Trees

Long hair

Plait and swing

Tying plaiting showing

Get a haircut it goes away

Earring cutting shortening

Neck fringe

Short hair

Long Hair

French Plait and swinging

Brushing tying plaiting

Shorten the long locks that falls on the flour

Cutting showing playing

Fringe scissors

Soft hair. fringe

Change

Falling drooping

Twirling floating

Golden daylight shining on the leaves.

Jumping playing

Crispy golden

Leaves.

Change

Falling fading

Dancing floating

Sun is shining on the leaves.

Loving piling

Leaves