Thread:Why OER? - What did you expect to find here? (7)

Yes, it does help :-). The first paragraph is great - a broader "change the world" aim and invitation to join the community :-).

The four "R"s section is in the right place here, ..., though personally, I find the "R"s a little "forced" for mnemonic value - viz. "Use", "Adapt", "Mix" and "Share".

At risk of being too minimalist, here is a possible rewording of the first paragraph incorporating the essence of 4 Rs:

The aim of OER is to improve education by sharing knowledge and learning resources. By joining this international community of educators you can save time, cut costs and contribute to improving the quality of learning around the world. With OER you are free to use, adapt, mix and share the resources, and become part of this growing community.

The value proposition is well placed.

I still think the Copyright and Fair Use sections should be moved to a section dedicated to licensing, and referred to from here. More on that later.