Thread:Tongan Wedding... (1)

hey girl,

you have done well so far....excellent!!!keep it up..

your key points are excellent but I think you need to explain each heading with a few sentences to clarify what you mean especially if a non Tongan wanted to use your content for a lesson..

Therefore keep the good work..there are few grammatical mistakes that will be corrected layer but the structure of your content is great so far..cheers