Thread:Edits needed (2)

Hi folks,

this is coming along. There are some edits needed to finalize the project.

Your math connection needs to be beefed up or replaced with a health connection (food pyramid would be a good place to start). Remove my initial instructions from the pitfalls section. Rephrase your content area section to reflect the fact that energy is required to melt the ice. The salt is not melting - rather it is dissolving. Energy is required to melt the ice, and the mixture gets that energy by removing heat from your ingredients baggie. mention that double bagging the ingredients is a mistake because the extra insulation prevents freezing