Thread:Changes needed (15)

Hi folks,

This is coming along well; there are some changes needed before final grading.

Your figures have duplicate numbering. Each needs a unique number and each should be cited somewhere in the text.

Rather than computer paper, give the dimensions you used.

You have one figure on the left; let's move it to the right or perhaps into a second gallery.

Biological coverage: Expand this section to describe what typically happens during exercise:


 * What happens to muscles?
 * What do they need?
 * What do they produce?
 * How does heart and breathing rate relate to the needs of the muscles?
 * Why is regular excercise excercise important? In fact, please add a health connection near the end and relate that to Phys Ed standards.

I thought you had video?

And the title? Can you offer some other suggestions for that. Let me know when you have agreed. I think it poorly reflects the content.

Otherwise, I think this looks very good.

Nice work