Edit for fourth sentence
The fourth sentence in the first section could use a bit of streamlining. I'm unclear about how the phrases at the end go together.
- "The open development model aims to maximise future reuse and remix by encouraging inputs during the design phase to avoid duplication of effort to tweak courses for reuse in different contexts."
I've clarified as follows (breaking into two sentences):
- "The open development model aims to maximise future reuse and remix. Encouraging inputs during the initial design phases can highlight potential reuse contexts which can be used to inform the structure and format of learning resources to reduce the remix effort required for future reuse scenarios."
Feel free to tweak and improve.
