Phase 2 Update (Victor & JC)

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Victor and I have issued our revised draft report. We welcome your comments, and we will continue to improve areas we think are lacking. We have exchnaged emails with Victor on thatm adn will definitely do with the team's input. I know Calvin has raised issues on duplication, which is an area we will need to tackle as a group, and see how best we can streamline the complete report.

JEREMIAH CHAPHXANYA (talk)05:32, 18 July 2011

We've had a lot of WIP's. Is this an official draft 1 from you guys...

Shumimlingo (talk)05:33, 18 July 2011

It's in a good form, and Victor has taken time to improve it. So yes i can say it has moved on from WIP to a final form. But your comments will be greatly appreciated.

JEREMIAH CHAPHXANYA (talk)05:37, 18 July 2011

ok, Lions let's send in comments shortly so that the various teams can quickly ammend their sections. JC I'll try to send in my thoughts by tommorrow.

Shumimlingo (talk)05:39, 18 July 2011
 

Yes, this is our official draft. We will present no more until after refining after comments come in on the combined draft.

Victor.mensah (talk)05:38, 18 July 2011