Introductory sentences problematic

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Hi Alison,

You're amazing! I am happy with all your suggestions. It's important to remain consistent.

Thanks :-)

W

Mackiwg (talk)22:36, 3 July 2012

Thanks....but really not (blush). I'll make the change.

Alison

ASnieckus (talk)13:08, 4 July 2012

I made one further change....put the name of the default in quotes. I think it helps learners see that this is the default phrase:

'...the default "© copyright all rights reserved" (applicable in most countries) contradicts...."

I like how this new lead-in in the introduction previews the contents of the module, namely the history page. Good addition.

Alison

ASnieckus (talk)13:21, 4 July 2012

Thanks Alison and Wayne :-)

KTucker (talk)00:55, 9 July 2012