Final Comments on 913 Assignment

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We circulated a draft earlier today. Does anyone have any pressing comments. If so lets have them in the next 10 minutes. If not pressing, you can e-mail them directly to our Team. Remember we upload on Tuesday. After these comments, Jerry you can take over.

Shumimlingo (talk)04:06, 13 July 2009

It looks good to me.

JEREMIAH CHAPHXANYA (talk)04:08, 13 July 2009
 

Hi Lions, just to inform all of you we got a full coverage page on the New Vision edition of Saturday the 11th of July, I will scan and forward to Shumi as an appendix. So we basically did all our tasks for this assignment. As Shumi send an email to you all about where did you circulate the Newsletter can the Lions send that by Monday the latest?--Luisaserra 16:11, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Luisaserra (talk)04:11, 13 July 2009

Good job - you all deserve a big pum pum

JEREMIAH CHAPHXANYA (talk)04:13, 13 July 2009
 

Shumi will goover it after the chat l did not open my yahoo so will go over it tonight and pass on my comments if there are any.--Shungunyoni 16:11, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Shungunyoni (talk)04:11, 13 July 2009

Lions, if no comments on 913, I will move on to 914. I hope I keep you all motivated and interested.

JEREMIAH CHAPHXANYA (talk)04:16, 13 July 2009
 

just commenced reading the draft. your execuitve summary looks great, but iam of the opinoin that the source of data quoted should be in the body of the document.

Akachi Ngwu (talk)04:18, 13 July 2009

Thanks Akachi, referencing is being sorted out. We'll have it perfected by tommorrow. --Shumimlingo 16:20, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Shumimlingo (talk)04:20, 13 July 2009
 

We did our best. Please send me responses on your private Newsletter circulation statistics as well as comments on our document. Over to you Jerry --Shumimlingo 16:18, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Shumimlingo (talk)04:18, 13 July 2009
 

Thanks SHumi. I have not received the draft yet in my mails. Kindly resend to my office mail.

Just as an update, i (our communications office) fowarded the newsletter to the CYP Africa Listserve last week. Even if we dont receive donations (which may be unlikely) people are now more aware of the plight of blind pupils in Uganda and definitly accross the continent. For statistics, our listserve goes directly to about 1470 people and organisations. some resend or repost on their sites.

Victor.mensah (talk)04:21, 13 July 2009

That is great Victor, I am sure Shumi will upload on the assignment final report--Luisaserra 16:23, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Luisaserra (talk)04:23, 13 July 2009
 

Thanks Bro! Good work --Shumimlingo 16:26, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Shumimlingo (talk)04:26, 13 July 2009