A few thoughts
Wayne - could you paste in the phrase you are speaking about -
related to: Would it be possible to collapse the two community building bullets into one succinct bullet - I'm thinking here about short concise messaging and the real estate demands on the front page - too many bullets and folk don't read the stuff.
My mistake ...
Under the heading Purpose (revised) on the Community building page I saw these bullets:
The WikiEducator is an evolving community intended for the collaborative:
* planning of education projects linked with the development of free content; * development of free content on Wikieducator for e-learning; * building cohesive and sustainable communities of support for educators; * building of individual, group, community capacity * work on building open education resources (OERs) on how to create OERs; * networking on funding proposals developed as free content.
Speed reading bullets 3 & 4 have the concept "community" - reading more carefully now, I see that these are two very different points.
Sorry about that.