912L final discussions
Hi Lions, I have not got any feed back on the contents of the drafts (work in progress) that I sent, I hope I have not created a lot of confusion, that was not the intention. Any concerns or comments you may have please let me know.--Luisaserra 16:04, 28 June 2009 (UTC)
just as you mentioned, the drafts came in torrents as one was confused. a quick questions i noticed you sent part 1 to part 8 yesrterday. is it different from the ones previuosly sent.
Hi Akachi, part 1 and 8 are basically the final of the document after my last visit to Salama on Friday. The reason why I was sending in separate parts is because I do not know how to condensed the photos, which Victor has kindly helped. I will only be attaching the appendixes, with the interviews I have doen, the pareto charts on the PLE exams and End of term reports results. The recomendations part will be attached from Shungu and I on Monday--Luisaserra 16:12, 28 June 2009 (UTC)
Hi Luisa, i sent the joined version to you and your team only. I dont knwo if you fowarded to everybody yet.
Hi Victor I have seen it but arrived in Kampala at 6pm and the wikichat was on at 7pm Uganda time, so I want to consolidate , based on the quality checks doen by Shungu over the week end and send it to you all still tonight. Once again thanks--Luisaserra 16:21, 28 June 2009 (UTC)
I have just gone through and its making a lot more of sense to me now as i have them all together. I was a bit worried about the flow, as a lot of content was presented as lists/bulleted. Was wondering if it may make it any better to utilise a lot more of paragraph/naratives. This is however a minor point and may be disregarded.