Talk:EDSLIONS/weekly discussions/April 11, 2010
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|Closing remarks||1||17:29, 11 April 2010|
|924Q||2||17:11, 11 April 2010|
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|922N Assignment||2||16:40, 11 April 2010|
|923P Assignment||0||16:34, 11 April 2010|
|926S final assignment||16||16:29, 11 April 2010|
|QUORUM||11||16:22, 11 April 2010|
Lions, thanks for all the comments and support for 926S, it has been a race against time. I wish you all a lovely week. Next Saturday I will be travelling to SriLanka for an entire week for the GMM(Greater management meeting) and this year is again in Asia. I will try to catch up on emails and I might not make it for the wiki as the time difference with Uganda is 3hours--Luisaserra 16:39, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
Guys, i see that 924Q is due on 19 April, have we received any draft from the members yet regarding this assignment? Have I missed something?
Lions, Just comments from my side around this assignment at last minute the It director at Coke refused to cooperate, I forward Victor her email, and requested Victor to get hold of you maybe he can highlight the way forward on this as soon as possible--Luisaserra 17:00, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
I am on. I have only just received the final document, and have one comment:"Our Environmental Organizational Safety and Health (EOSH) are of high standards at CBC..." are we referring here to a EOSH policy/philosophy/committee? "environmentally friend "- please change to "friendly"
Should we include a glossary or perhaps put the full word in brackets when we use abbreviations, such as PPE
"CBC does not tolerate any forms of harassment - perhaps say that CBC has zero tolerance towards any form of harassment, and clearly stipulate the different forms of harassment in the workplace, as listed below..
Other than that, well done.
Thanks, Evelyn, regarding the acronyms the code as been developed for the staff at CBC those acronyms are part of the way we talk, we do not ever say the prersonal protective equipment we always say PPE, and the same goes for EOSH, and alo for TCCMS, HR, and SAP, etc. I have included an abbreviations list for the assignment, but the code itself will keep the acronyms as these are part of the way we talk. The other sugestions I am reading now the assignment and incorporating--Luisaserra 16:18, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
thanks guys, I am relieved that I am able to communicate with you. This is a great forum. I am welcomed.
Evelyn, it is good that you finally made it. Here in this forum is where we can best communicate live with each other and it helps a lot with the assignments, as queries can be taken live nad cleared. Thanks for your inputs I really appreciatted--Luisaserra 16:25, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
Thanks Luisa- I totally understand your reason for keeping the acronmyms in the body of the assignment. THe glossary will be key, in ensuring that the reader of the document, in this case the lecturer, is clear. One of the points in report writing, is to be clear and concise so as to assist the reader in understanding and grasping at first glance. You know the company and the right speak which is part of the company culture, however, the reader of the report does not know that. External users of a report is not necessarily knowledgeable with company culture/values/language.
hie lions lamlogged on luisa i have not read the doc yet l have been experiencing internet challenges since morning. --Shungunyoni 16:18, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
Shungu, please make an effort to read it. This type of assignments is your strength your input is valuable specailly around the critique I tried my best because I only got bullet points from Tracy, so make an effort please--Luisaserra 16:23, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
the assignement requirement is 15 pages but we have 21 pages. can we cut it down?
Guys I send out a draft and i have nt received a single feedback.
Lions, I have incorporated the sugestions I have received. Please let's comment the final document I want ot up load, after hearing from you.--Luisaserra 16:02, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
hi luisa, thanks for the good work. just saw Shumi's contribution this morning. is it part of the final work for uploading? it will be nice if u will send the final copy to members before uploading.
I did not see the doc because the emails it was sent to are not easy to access. Will you guys use firstname.lastname@example.org and email@example.com. Do not use the equatorial one because that is for work. My apology to those who did not know.
Watanga Hove nema email ako ekuEquitorial Guinea.
Akachi, I have sent you the final 926S document, the only thing missing is table of contents, refernce and annexures that can only be done when the rest is signed off, can you comment on the document I have sent you about 30 minutes ago. thanks--Luisaserra 16:11, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
Luisa I saw Shumi's docs, nice comments. Good stuff to date.
I have posted my final comments, but see now that it is more or less in line with Shumi's comments.
Please note that you have not allocated marks under my name on page 1.
Thanks once again Luisa for a superb effort.
Hi Evelyn, everyone has 100% contribution in this assignemnt. Although it was sitting with me, Shungu and Shumi as sub group everyone else contributed, so the mark goes 100% for everyone. I will recheck and definetly when I upload all will have 100%--Luisaserra 16:29, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
Victor how are you my branda? I have taken an initiative and done the quorum the other way round. Have you gone through that doc?